Is it okay to use weekends for extra work or study?
학생이 쓴 원문
It depends on whether I want to do or I have to do.
The first one, I can do with pleasure.
But the last one, I try my best to not to do on weekend.
강사 첨삭
You gave a clear and honest answer, and I like how you clearly separated the two situations, doing extra work by choice versus doing it out of obligation. Your opinion is easy to understand and very relatable. To improve further, focus on using complete sentence structures and clearer transitions like “in the first case” and “however.” Overall, this was a thoughtful and well-expressed response. Nice work!
-Teacher Wela
It depends on whether I want to do or I have to do.
>> It depends on whether I want to do it or have to do it.
The first one, I can do with pleasure.
>> In the first case, I can do it with pleasure.
But the last one, I try my best to not to do on weekend.
>> However, in the second case, I try my best not to do it on the weekend.
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