Is it okay to use your phone while eating out with friends? Why or why not?
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Hi Mary! That was a very considerate and well-organized answer. You expressed your thoughts clearly about phone etiquette, and I like how you showed respect for your friends by emphasizing full attention during conversations. That shows great social awareness and empathy! Your examples made your point convincing and realistic, I can tell you value good communication and manners. Keep up the great work, and continue expressing your opinions with this level of thoughtfulness!
-Teacher Wela
I think that it is okay to use phone in urgent situation or break time to talk.
>> I think it is okay to use a phone in urgent situations or during a break.
But when I talk with friends, using phone seems to rude.
>> But when I talk with friends, using a phone seems rude.
Because using phone and listening someone\'s word at the same time is impossible.
>> Because using a phone and listening to someone at the same time is impossible.
Then, if someone use the phone during the conversation, she can\'t entirely pay attention to your talking.
>> If someone uses a phone during the conversation, they can’t fully pay attention to what you’re saying.
Rather, if I want to use phone, I politely ask them how about taking a break.
>> Instead, if I want to use my phone, I politely ask if we can take a short break.
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