Is it okay to use your phone while eating out with friends? Why or why not?

2025-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Wela

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I think that it is okay to use phone in urgent situation or break time to talk. But when I talk with friends, using phone seems to rude. Because using phone and listening someone\'s word at the same time is impossible. Then, if someone use the phone during the conversation, she can\'t entirely pay attention to your talking. I don\'t like that situation. Rather, if I want to use phone, I politely ask them how about taking a break.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mary! That was a very considerate and well-organized answer. You expressed your thoughts clearly about phone etiquette, and I like how you showed respect for your friends by emphasizing full attention during conversations. That shows great social awareness and empathy! Your examples made your point convincing and realistic, I can tell you value good communication and manners. Keep up the great work, and continue expressing your opinions with this level of thoughtfulness!

-Teacher Wela 

I think that it is okay to use phone in urgent situation or break time to talk.

>> I think it is okay to use a phone in urgent situations or during a break.

But when I talk with friends, using phone seems to rude.

>> But when I talk with friends, using a phone seems rude.

Because using phone and listening someone\'s word at the same time is impossible.

>>  Because using a phone and listening to someone at the same time is impossible.

Then, if someone use the phone during the conversation, she can\'t entirely pay attention to your talking.
>> If someone uses a phone during the conversation, they can’t fully pay attention to what you’re saying.

Rather, if I want to use phone, I politely ask them how about taking a break.

>>  Instead, if I want to use my phone, I politely ask if we can take a short break.

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