Is it possible to be a hero in the modern world?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think it is possible to be a hero in the modern world.
Since these days SNS are so much developed, so every one can be a hero.
For example, there was a drunken man who walked subway platform. He suddenly lost his footing so he fall in the railroad. At that time a man who watching a drunken man, suddenly jumped down on the railroad, laying on the hidden space between railroad and platform. so he saved a drunken man.
At that time some pedestrians took a photo and video of all the accident, and uploaded on the SNS. So he could be a hero for a while.
However, the hero period is not so long. Since there are so many information uploaded on the SNS, and it passed soon. So most people forget about hero.
These are the reason why I think it is possible to be a hero in the modern world, but it is difficult to preserve it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! (^^,)/
Happy Friday again.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
Thank you very much for this composition.
\"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles.\"
That quote was cited by the famous actor Christopher Reeve, who played the role of Superman in 1978.
You don\'t need superpowers to do something remarkable or important.
Ordinary people are everywhere and I honestly believe that to this date, heroes exist.
The soldiers who risk their lives to protect their country are heroes.
Health care providers like doctors and nurses who care for the sick are heroes.
A fireman who risks his life to save someone in a burning building is a hero.
A teacher who saves a child from ignorance is a hero.
A hero exists in each and everyone of us.
It is the little things that we do everyday to make other people\'s lives better that make us a hero.
Before I say goodbye, please allow me to share you another quote:
\"True heroism is remarkably sober, very undramatic.
It is not the urge to surpass all others at whatever cost,
but the urge to serve others at whatever cost.\"
I hope I have inspired you to become a hero in your own way [이름].
See you again on Monday! Take care and God bless!
~Teacher Charry (^_^)
I think it is possible to be a hero in the modern world.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think having heroes in the modern world is possible.
Since these days SNS are so much developed, so every one can be a hero.
>> These days, the SNS is very much developed, so everyone can be a hero. For example, there was a drunken man who walked subway platform.
>> For example, there was a drunken man who walked by the subway platform.
He suddenly lost his footing so he fall in the railroad.
>> He suddenly lost his footing so he fell over on the railroad.
At that time a man who watching a drunken man, suddenly jumped down on the railroad, laying on the hidden space between railroad and platform.
>> At that time, a man who was watching the drunken man, suddenly jumped down on the railroad, lying on the hidden space between railroad and platform.
so he saved a drunken man.
>> He attempted to save the drunken man.At that time some pedestrians took a photo and video of all the accident, and uploaded on the SNS.
>> Some pedestrians took a photo or a video of the full incident and uploaded them on SNS.
So he could be a hero for a while.
>> He became a hero for a while. However, the hero period is not so long.
>> However, the recognition for being a hero doesn\'t last.
Since there are so many information uploaded on the SNS, and it passed soon.
>> Since there are so many informations uploaded on SNS, the story about this hero got lost and forgotten.
So most people forget about hero.
>> Most people forget about the heroes and their heroic actions. These are the reason why I think it is possible to be a hero in the modern world, but it is difficult to preserve it.
>> These are the reasons why I think it is possible to be a hero in the modern world, but it is difficult to make the recognition last.
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