Is it possible to have a healthy lifestyle in the modern world?
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T. James
I think that it is possible to have a healthy life in modern world.
>>> I think that it is possible to have a healthy life in the modern world.
There are a lot of healty food recently.
>>> There are a lot of healthy foods recently.
We can pick them and eat for well-being.
>>> CORRECT
Also, to exercise has emerged in korea such as jyms, pilates and yoga etc.
>>> Also, to exercise has emerged in Korea such as gyms, Pilates and yoga etc.
Now people is more pay attention to health then before.
>>> Now people is more pay attention to health than before.
I believe that if we decide to have a healthy life,
>>> CORRECT
we can live.
>>> We can.
>>OR: We can live longer.
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