Is it right for South Korea to prioritize national security over refugee protection?
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I think it isn\'t the opposite things between national security and refugee protection.
it\'s understandable that south korea government want to protect its citizen.
But I think it doesn\'t mean that they can ignore their international duty for refugees.
i believe it\'s possible to coexist if there are specific system.
i think south korea government have to scane carefully and efficiently the identity for refrugee for protecting their citizen.
To do that way, they need to action to make some system.
I hope it can be made sooner.
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I see what you mean, Alice!
I agree that national security and refugee protection don’t have to conflict. A careful and efficient system for screening refugees seems like a good solution. I hope the government can create such a system soon too, so both citizens and refugees are safe.
- Kristine ^^
I think it isn\'t the opposite things between national security and refugee protection.
>> I don’t think national security and refugee protection are opposites.
it\'s understandable that south korea government want to protect its citizen.
it\'s understandable that south korea government want to protect its citizen.
>> It’s understandable that the South Korean government wants to protect its citizens.
But I think it doesn\'t mean that they can ignore their international duty for refugees.
But I think it doesn\'t mean that they can ignore their international duty for refugees.
>> But I don’t think that means they can ignore their international duty to refugees.
i believe it\'s possible to coexist if there are specific system.
i believe it\'s possible to coexist if there are specific system.
>> I believe it’s possible for both to coexist if there is a proper system in place.
i think south korea government have to scane carefully and efficiently the identity for refrugee for protecting their citizen.
i think south korea government have to scane carefully and efficiently the identity for refrugee for protecting their citizen.
>> I think the South Korean government needs to carefully and efficiently verify the identity of refugees to protect its citizens.
To do that way, they need to action to make some system.
>> To do that, they need to take action to create a proper system.
I hope it can be made sooner.
I hope it can be made sooner.
>> I hope it can be implemented soon.
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