is it right for wild animals to stay in the zoo instead of in the forest?
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Is it right for wild animals to stay in the zoo instead of in the forest?
i think the animals to stay in the forest because animals are like same as if person
>> I think wild animals should stay in the forest because they are like human beings who need to stay in their natural habitat.
everyone doesn\'t like bondage because bondage closed to open theirown
>> Everyone doesn\'t like to be confined in a place where they\'re uncomfortable and unhappy.
>> OR: Nobody wants to be confined in a place where they\'re uncomfortable and unhappy.
i think when they live forest they feel so happy and get freedom
>> When they live in the forest, I think they would feel free and happy.
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