Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?

2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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It's a difficult question of whether it is right to do the wrong thing for the right reason. Some people might insist that it is never right to do the wrong thing for any reason. However, such statements could be found only in a book. I think there are situations where we have to do the wrong thing for the right reason, although it may not be right. An extreme example is the revenge you take on the murderer who killed your loved one as we typically see in a movie. There are many cases that we sympathize the convict who had to commit a crime. In accordance with a law, any wrongdoings cannot be justified regardless of your own situation. However, we often face the case that the enforcement of law is not enough or appropriate. A law is not always right to some people. Indeed, in the real world, many poor and powerless people are not protected by the law. Even worse, they are suffering or being victimized by the rich becuase of the law. There's a saying, "All mighty is the dollar."

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

I hope that you are doing great today.

I am so grateful for your time and effort to write a composition.

All of the things you wrote below are right.

Keep up the good job.

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See you.
Teacher Nina


It\'s a difficult question of whether it is right to do the wrong thing for the right reason.

>> CORRECT

Some people might insist that it is never right to do the wrong thing for any reason.

>> CORRECT

However, such statements could be found only in a book.

>> CORRECT

I think there are situations where we have to do the wrong thing for the right reason, although it may not be right.

>> CORRECT

An extreme example is the revenge you take on the murderer who killed your loved one as we typically see in a movie.

>> CORRECT

There are many cases that we sympathize the convict who had to commit a crime.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: There are many cases that we sympathize the convicted person.

In accordance with a law, any wrongdoings cannot be justified regardless of your own situation.

>> Better: In accordance with the law, any wrongdoings cannot be justified regardless of your own situation.

However, we often face the case that the enforcement of law is not enough or appropriate.

>> CORRECT

A law is not always right to some people.

>> CORRECT

Indeed, in the real world, many poor and powerless people are not protected by the law.

>> CORRECT

Even worse, they are suffering or being victimized by the rich becuase of the law.

>> CORRECT ( spelling check: because ^^)

There\'s a saying, \"All mighty is the dollar.\"

>> CORRECT

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