Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?
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It\'s a difficult question of whether it is right to do the wrong thing for the right reason.
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Some people might insist that it is never right to do the wrong thing for any reason.
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However, such statements could be found only in a book.
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I think there are situations where we have to do the wrong thing for the right reason, although it may not be right.
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An extreme example is the revenge you take on the murderer who killed your loved one as we typically see in a movie.
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There are many cases that we sympathize the convict who had to commit a crime.
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>> OR: There are many cases that we sympathize the convicted person.
In accordance with a law, any wrongdoings cannot be justified regardless of your own situation.
>> Better: In accordance with the law, any wrongdoings cannot be justified regardless of your own situation.
However, we often face the case that the enforcement of law is not enough or appropriate.
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A law is not always right to some people.
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Indeed, in the real world, many poor and powerless people are not protected by the law.
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Even worse, they are suffering or being victimized by the rich becuase of the law.
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There\'s a saying, \"All mighty is the dollar.\"
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