Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?

2016-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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By the book, we should say that it is not right to do the wrong thing even for the right reason. We all grew up learning that good results don’t justify everything. How to achieve it is also as important as a result. However, are we living in a world that we can teach our children to live in a right way? The reality is that we have often witnessed that innocent and good people who live in belief that justice wins evil were deceived, betrayed, used and abandoned by the wicked people who have money and power. We all dream of the society where justice prevails. However, it is true that the wicked prosper and the righteous suffer. What if you have done right and get penalized while the guy who did wrong got ahead? We all don’t want to believe in “The end justify the means.” Sometimes you have to cross that line. Sometimes you have to do the wrong thing for the right reason. Everyone would maybe hate on you forever for killing but sometimes the outcome outweighs the negatives.

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Hello there Sir [이름]! How are you today? Did you have a good day? Your composition was awesome.Thank you for spending some time to write your ideas. I am so blessed to have a great student like you. See you.Teacher Nina   By the book, we should say that it is not right to do the wrong thing even for the right reason. >> correct We all grew up learning that good results don’t justify everything. >> correct How to achieve it is also as important as a result. >> correct However, are we living in a world that we can teach our children to live in a right way? >> correct The reality is that we have often witnessed that innocent and good people who live in belief that justice wins evil were deceived, betrayed, used and abandoned by the wicked people who have money and power. >> correct We all dream of the society where justice prevails. >> correct However, it is true that the wicked prosper and the righteous suffer. >> correct What if you have done right and get penalized while the guy who did wrong got ahead? >> correct We all don’t want to believe in “The end justify the means.” >> correct Sometimes you have to cross that line. >> correct Sometimes you have to do the wrong thing for the right reason. >> correct Everyone would maybe hate on you forever for killing but sometimes the outcome outweighs the negatives. >> Everyone would maybe hate you forever for killing, but sometimes the outcome outweighs the negative.

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