Is it rude to tell the person that they need to improve their appearance?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think that it is rude to tell the person that they need to improve their appearance. I am the person who can\'t dress well. So, when I go to buy a new clothes, I should go to shopping mall with my wife. Clothes that my wife recommended me are better than I chose. When I show a cloth which I chose, my wife said to me something that I was strenuous to listen. But, I am satisfied the result of shopping.
I can\'t go shopping without my wife.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny!
Thank you for stating your opinion regarding this matter.
It is true that there\'s nothing wrong with telling others that they should improve their appearance, as long as it is said nicely.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again later. :)
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for stating your opinion regarding this matter.
It is true that there\'s nothing wrong with telling others that they should improve their appearance, as long as it is said nicely.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again later. :)
~Teacher Charry
I don\'t think that it is rude to tell the person that they need to
improve their appearance.
>> I don\'t think that it is rude to tell people that they need to
improve their appearance.
I am the person who can\'t dress well.
> I am the type of person who can\'t dress well.
So, when
I go to buy a new clothes, I should go to shopping mall with my wife.
>> So, when I go buy new clothes, I should go to the shopping mall with my wife.
Clothes that my wife recommended me are better than I chose.
>> The clothes that my wife recommended to me are better than the ones I chose.
When I show
a cloth which I chose, my wife said to me something that I was
strenuous to listen.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: When I show my wife the clothes that I have chosen, my wife gives helpful feedback which I carefully listen to.
But, I am satisfied the result of shopping.
>> But, I am satisfied with the result of our shopping spree.
I can\'t go shopping without my wife.
>> CORRECT!
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