Is it sometimes better to take risks than to follow a more reasonable course of action?

2016-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I agree with this view to some extent but I still support to plan and control what can be controlled by some way. Because, normally, I don’t like to face what I didn’t expect. Such as weather report, I can check the weather before leaving house in case of rain. Besides, especially when I have a lot of things to do, I expect things to go based on my schedule which I arranged before. It’s important especially in examination period. So I think there are more benefits when we can control over things. Being reckless, however, has its own merits, I think. For instance, when we are traveling, it can make us excited for c[이름]ot expecting what will be popped up. I think it is good as long as one is not concerned of anything…

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Hi there [이름]a! (^_^) How are you doing today dear? Thank you very much for writing in our composition board. I loved reading about your opinion and I agree when you said both point-of-views are correct but to a different extent. Like you, I also want to execute things in a well-pl[이름]ed m[이름]er. It\'s because I honestly believe that without adequate preparation, I will not achieve the results that I want to get. For me, it is way much better when you are well prepared and in full control of the things that you could actually control. I often tell my students that most of the time, we don\'t have the power to change or control the situations at hand but we can always control the way we react towards these situations. (^_~) I hope you are having a wonderful day [이름]a. See you again tomorrow. Take care. ~Teacher Charry (^_^) I agree with this view to some extent but I still support to plan and control what can be controlled by some way. >>  I agree with this view to some extent but I still support the idea that we plan and control what can be controlled in some ways.Because, normally, I don’t like to face what I didn’t expect. >> Because normally, I don’t like to face things that I don\'t expect. OR >> It\'s because I normally don\'t like to deal with unexpected things. Such as weather report, I can check the weather before leaving house in case of rain. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: Like the weather for instance, I can check it before leaving the house in case it would rain.Besides, especially when I have a lot of things to do, I expect things to go based on my schedule which I arranged before. >> CORRECT! OR >> Besides, when I have many things to do, I expect things to go smoothly as pl[이름]ed. It’s important especially in examination period. >> CORRECT! OR >> It\'s important especially when you are about to take a test. So I think there are more benefits when we can control over things. >> So I think there are more benefits when we can control things. OR >> So I think there are more benefits when we have control over things. Being reckless, however, has its own merits, I think. >> CORRECT! OR >> On the other hand, I think being reckless has its own merits.For instance, when we are traveling, it can make us excited for c[이름]ot expecting what will be popped up. >>  For instance, when we are traveling, it can make us excited for we do not know what to expect or what will pop up.I think it is good as long as one is not concerned of anything… >> CORRECT! OR >> I think it is good for as long as one is not concerned about anything.

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