Is it the responsibittly of wealthy nations to prodive \"climate refuge\"fo people displaced by [이름]n

2026-05-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think rich country is to prodive \"climate refuge\"is not bad,but rich country people everyone is \"okay\" I don\'t know. I want this in not start of my country.

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Here\'s the second homework, Jimmy!

I appreciate your uploading it. You can see the corrected version below. 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                                 
             Is it the responsibility of wealthy nations to provide “climate refuge” for people displaced by climate [이름]nge?



I think rich country is to prodive \"climate refuge\"is not bad,but rich country people everyone is \"okay\" I don\'t know.
>>> I think it’s not a bad idea for rich countries to provide climate refuge, but I’m not sure if everyone in those countries would agree.

I want this in not start of my country.
>>> I don’t want this to start in my country.

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