Is it wise to be suspicious of the motives or honesty of other people, even those who appear to be t

2017-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

I have read a sentence ‘Trust’ can’t be suitable word in front of the human-by a famous writer whose name I already have forgotten’. I thought it was right since most of people might be able to betray the others if they meet terrible situations. On the other hands, before I write this, I watched a movie called the age of shadows. In the movie tells about history when Korea was invaded by Japan. A guy who worked for Japanese government ratted on the people who wanted to the national independence from the Japan and sold our country for earning property. Nevertheless the people were caught by them and gotten a torture, they didn’t betray the others. That kind of activities made our country to have become an independence nationality. However, most of people became a mammonism nowadays so it is possible to change their mind easily when they meet changeable circumstances. Therefore, I think it is wise to be suspicious the others although they are trustworthy.

강사 첨삭

Oh my, a lot of people who looked trustworthy in the beginning turned out to be traitors.

Unfortunately, one of the greatest traitors I know was the first president of the Philippine Republic.

On the other hand, I think humans are definitely capable of doing this, since some of us naturally want to protect ourselves from danger.

Thanks for this, and see you Jason!

I have read a sentence ‘Trust’ can’t be suitable word in front of the human-by a famous writer whose name I already have forgotten’.

>>I have read a sentence, \"Trust can’t be a suitable word in front of a human\", by a famous writer whose name I already have forgotten.

I thought it was right since most of people might be able to betray the others if they meet terrible situations.

>>I thought it was right since most people might be able to betray the others if they meet terrible situations.

 On the other hands, before I write this, I watched a movie called the age of shadows.

>> On the other hand, before I wrote this, I watched a movie called The Age of Shadows.

 In the movie tells about history when Korea was invaded by Japan.

>>The movie tells about the history when Korea was invaded by Japan.

A guy who worked for Japanese government ratted on the people who wanted to the national independence from the Japan and sold our country for earning property.

>>A guy who worked for the Japanese government ratted on the people who wanted to gain national independence from Japan and sold our country for earning property.

Nevertheless the people were caught by them and gotten a torture, they didn’t betray the others.

>>Even though the people were caught and tortured, they didn’t betray the others.

 That kind of activities made our country to have become an independence nationality.

>>That kind of activity made our country an independent nation.
 However, most of people became a mammonism nowadays so it is possible to change their mind easily when they meet changeable circumstances.

>> However, most people became mammonistic nowadays, so it is possible to change their mind easily when they meet changeable circumstances.

 Therefore, I think it is wise to be suspicious the others although they are trustworthy.

>> Therefore, I think it is wise to be suspicious about others although they appear trustworthy.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·