Is Korea becoming multilingual country?

2018-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Yes.I think we are on the step of multilingual country though we are far from it now. Thease days, we can see many fluent English speakers in Korea and we use lots of English words in our daily life. I think we want to keep our own language, Korean, but also we want to use English fluently like second language. Also,The people who are learning not only English but also other languages are increasing. That\'s why I think Korea is becoming multilingual country.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름]. Thank you once again for sending this in. English indeed is the international language. People want to expand their horizon and enter the global market. I guess that is the reason why most people from non-English speaking countries want to learn English. It is for a better future. Good luck!

- T. Beth :)

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Yes. I think we are on the step of multilingual country though we are far from it now.

>>> Yes, I think we are on the step towards becoming a multilingual country though we are far from it now.

>>> OR: Yes, I think we are taking a step towards becoming a multilingual country but we are currently still far from being one.

>>> OR: Yes, I think we are taking a step towards becoming a multilingual country but we are currently still far behind.
Thease days, we can see many fluent English speakers in Korea and we use lots of English words in our daily life.

>>> These days, we can see many fluent English speakers in Korea and we use lots of English words in our daily lives.

>>> OR: These days, there are a lot of fluent English speakers in Korea and we use English words quite often in our daily lives.

I think we want to keep our own language, Korean, but also we want to use English fluently like second language. 

>>> I think we want to keep our own language which is Korean, but we also want to use English fluently like a second language. 

Also,The people who are learning not only English but also other languages are increasing.

>>> In addition, the number of people who are learning not only English but other languages as well is increasing.

That\'s why I think Korea is becoming multilingual country.

>>> That\'s why I think Korea is becoming a multilingual country.


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