Is Learning a Foreign Language Really Important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chloe this is KAL ~!
First of all I would like to say sorry to you because of my recent attendence which is not good. Even if I forgot or missed call I really like your class which is really helpful for me.
I would like talk about Feb.10th homework. In my opinion , learning a foreign language is crucial becausse I wanna work at other countries. However I didn't decide countries because I don't know even my future work that's why I'm studying Enlgish but also I will study Mandarin which will be universal language.
Learning a foreign language is really tough but it's essential
If we know other country languages we can have a lot of opportunities
like you Chloe :D
강사 첨삭
There are many reasons to learn English, but because it is one of the most difficult languages to learn it is important to focus on exactly why it is you want to learn English. English is the most commonly used language among foreign language speakers. Throughout the world, when people with different languages come together they commonly use English to communicate. So, what is your reason of studying English? Do you have other reasons? Oh! Let us talk more about it in our class. Anyway, have a happy Wednesday!
-Teacher Chloe
Hi Chloe this is KAL ~!
>>Hi Chloe! This is [Name]. First of all I would like to say sorry to you because of my recent attendence which is not good.
>>First of all, I would like to say sorry to you because my recent attendance is not good.
Even if I forgot or missed call I really like your class which is really helpful for me.>>Though I forget or miss your calls, I want you to know that I really like our class because it is helpful to me. I would like talk about Feb.10th homework.
>>I would like to talk about our homework last February 10.
In my opinion , learning a foreign language is crucial becausse I wanna work at other countries.
>>To me, learning a foreign language is essential because I want to work abroad.
>>To me, learning a foreign language is essential because I want to work in other countries.
However I didn\'t decide countries because I don\'t know even my future work that\'s why I\'m studying Enlgish but also I will study Mandarin which will be universal language.>>However, I don\'t know where to work yet because I don\'t still know about my future work. I am studying English right now because it is the universal language. Also, I will study Mandarin. Learning a foreign language is really tough but it\'s essential
>>Learning a foreing language is really tough but essential. If we know other country languages we can have a lot of opportunities like you Chloe :D
>>If we know other countries\' languages we can have a lot of opportunities like you, Chloe.
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