Is learning something new a waste of time?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think,learning something new is valuable in life.
If people enjoy learning new things,they are trying to improve their life.
Their brain will not be older than other people.
Learning whatever they do, seems to give people energy.
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~~ Teacher Sharon>> I think learning something new is valuable in life.
If people enjoy learning new things,they are trying to improve their life.
If people enjoy learning new things,they are trying to improve their life.
>> If people enjoy learning new things, they would be able to improve their life.
Their brain will not be older than other people.
Their brain will not be older than other people.
>> Their brain will remain active and therefore, they will stay sharp.
Learning whatever they do, seems to give people energy.
Learning whatever they do, seems to give people energy.
>> Learning in whatever they do seems to give people energy.
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