Is making money the only thing a company should be concerned about? If not, what else should compani
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An organization has an obligation to act for the benefit of society at large.
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>> OR: An organization has the obligation to act for the benefit of society at large.
Social responsibility is a duty every corporation has to perform so as to maintain a balance between the economy and the ecosystems.
>> Social responsibility is a duty that every corporation has to perform so as to maintain balance between the economy and the ecosystem.
A trade-off may exist between economic development, in the material sense, and the welfare of the society and environment.
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However, they have to take the impact on society into account.
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Businesses do not exist only for making money.
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They can earn money thanks to their customers.
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>> OR: They can earn money through their customers and thanks to them.
Enterprises should have in place a process to integrate social, environmental, ethical human rights and consumer concerns into their business operations and core strategy in close collaboration with their stakeholders.
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>> OR: Enterprises should have in place a process to integrate social, environmental, ethical human rights, consumer concerns into their business operations and core strategy in close collaboration with their stakeholders.
Corporate social responsibility is increasingly important to the competitiveness of enterprises.
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It can bring benefits in terms of risk management, cost savings, customer relationships, human resource management, and innovation capacity.
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THey should be passionate about our community.
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