Is marriage still sacred in your country?
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Is marriage still sacred in your country?
Marriage has a good thing and bad thing.
>>There is a good thing and a bad thing about marriage.
or>>A marriage has both good things and bad things in it.
Some people say, marrige is nessassary, but some people say, it doesn\'t need.
>>Some people say that marriage is necessary, but others say that it is not needed.
Young generation scared of marrige but, I think marrige is an option.
>>The younger generation are scared of marriage, but I think marriage is an option.
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