Is marriage still sacred in your country?

2020-01-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Marriage has a good thing and bad thing. Some people say, marrige is nessassary, but some people say, it doesn\'t need. Young generation scared of marrige but, I think marrige is an option.

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Is marriage still sacred in your country?

Marriage has a good thing and bad thing.

>>There is a good thing and a bad thing about marriage.

or>>A marriage has both good things and bad things in it.

Some people say, marrige is nessassary, but some people say, it doesn\'t need.

>>Some people say that marriage is necessary, but others say that it is not needed.

Young generation scared of marrige but, I think marrige is an option.

>>The younger generation are scared of marriage, but I think marriage is an option.

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