Is marriage still sacred in your country?

I would say Yes to your question, I believe marriage is very sacred and full of happiness per se. Also I have been married to my spouse very happily since we got married, some of not good people wants to marry to their spouse to get rich more or go upstair social level or get more reputation. If you pursue money or something that visible ones, their marriage is not going to be no longer exist. I always tell my kids to try to find their true love and don\'t see their background as I did it when I met my spouse. I think money is vital to live in real life but not the most. I strongly believe that there are more precious things than visible valuable things.

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Is marriage still sacred in your country?

I would say Yes to your question, I believe marriage is very sacred and full of happiness per se.

>>I would say “yes” to your question, I believe marriage per se,  is very sacred and full of happiness.

Also I have been married to my spouse very happily since we got married, some of not good people wants to marry to their spouse to get rich more or go upstair social level or get more reputation.

>>Also, I have been married to my spouse very happily since we got married, some of the “not so good” people want to marry a rich spouse, in order to climb up the social ladder and obtain a good reputation.

If you pursue money or something that visible ones, their marriage is not going to be no longer exist.

>>If you pursue money or something that is very visible, the marriage is not going to last long.

I always tell my kids to try to find their true love and don\'t see their background as I did it when I met my spouse.

>>I always tell my kids to try and find their true love and they shouldn’t look at the person’s background, just like I did when I met my spouse.

I think money is vital to live in real life but not the most.

>>I think money is vital to be able to live comfortably in the real world, but it’s not the most important thing.

I strongly believe that there are more precious things than visible valuable things.

>>I strongly believe that there are more precious things than the visible things in this world which we think are important.