Is mental health more important than physical health?
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I think mental health is more important than physical health.
Mental health mean mental and emotional conditions such as stress, anxiety, and depression.
If mental doesn\'t health, t can cause physical damage as well.
For example, many stress may cause abnormalities in the body.
That\'s why I think intensive care of mental health makes life healthy.
example, take a enough rest and sleep, regulary exercise, keep positive mind.
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I think mental health is more important than physical health.
>>> correct
Mental health mean mental and emotional conditions such as stress, anxiety, and depression.
Mental health mean mental and emotional conditions such as stress, anxiety, and depression.
>>> Mental health means mental and emotional conditions such as stress, anxiety, and depression.
If mental doesn\'t health, t can cause physical damage as well.
>>> If the mental condition isn\'t healthy, it can cause physical damage as well.
For example, many stress may cause abnormalities in the body.
>>> correct
>>> OR: For example, too much stress may causes abnormalities in the body.
That\'s why I think intensive care of mental health makes life healthy.
>>> correct
example, take a enough rest and sleep, regulary exercise, keep positive mind.
>>> For example, take enough rest and sleep, regularly exercise, keep a positive mind.
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