Is my personality suit for my job?

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I think my personality is suit for my job.

>> I think my personality suits my job.

There are three reason why I think this way.

>> There are three reasons why I think this way.

First, I like to explain something and lead people who are younger than me.

>> CORRECT

Since I was younger, I have always made good relationships with my younger cousins and liked to hang out with them as a leader.

>> CORRECT

It was pleasure to me to make them be happy and fun.

>> It was a pleasure to me to make them happy and fun.

Also I liked teach something I had already learned to younger cousins.

>> Also, I liked teaching something I have already learned to younger cousins.

Second, I like children.

>> CORRECT

They are cute, creative and energetic.

>> CORRECT

Sometimes they are so noisy but it makes me be vibrant and think the time when I was in the school.

>> Sometimes they are so noisy but it makes me vibrant and think about the time when I was in the school.

The last reason is that there are more women than men in elementary school, which is different from most other works.

>> CORRECT

It is important to me because I can\'t control my anger if I feel discriminated against because of my sex.

>> It is important to me because I can\'t control my anger if I feel discriminated because of my sex.

There are more women in school so women are not discriminated and can be whatever she want to.

>> There are more women in school so women are not discriminated and can be whatever they want to.