Is nationality a problem in today’s world? Please explain your answer in complete sentences.
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I think nationality can be a problem in modern society. In my case, even though I am korean, I try to live in Australia which is different nationality. In order to live in a defferent nation, I have to spend my time and money keeping my visa. Sometimes people would like to stay other countries for their business or study, however, they can stay the country where they would like to stay because of different nationality.
Also, nationality is closely related to national culture. People who are in different cultures are unable to understand each others. It means it can occur diverse kinds of problems between (among?) them.
As a result, nationality can be a problem in today’s world.
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I think nationality can be a problem in modern society. In my case, even though I am korean, I try to live in Australia which is different nationality. In order to live in a defferent nation, I have to spend my time and money keeping my visa. Sometimes people would like to stay other countries for their business or study, however, they can stay the country where they would like to stay because of different nationality.
Also, nationality is closely related to national culture. People who are in different cultures are unable to understand each others. It means it can occur diverse kinds of problems between (among?) them.
As a result, nationality can be a problem in today’s world.
Also, nationality is closely related to national culture. People who are in different cultures are unable to understand each others. It means it can occur diverse kinds of problems between (among?) them.
As a result, nationality can be a problem in today’s world.
>> I think nationality can be a problem in modern society. In my case, I\'m a Korean but now I\'m living in another country. In order for me to live in this country, I have to spend much of my time and money to keep my visa. Sometimes, other people would stay in other countries for business or studies. Also, nationality is closely related to national culture where in people are unable to understand each other because of cultural differences. We can encounter different kinds of problems among us and as a result, nationality can be a problem in today\'s world.
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