Is obesity a disease?

Long time ago, obesity is hardly exit. Nowadays most people eat too much especially, they eat junk food a lot. That makes people fatter and fatter. Recently, many people suffer form obesity. Obesity cases other diseases such as diabetes, hypertension. Definitely obesity is a disease and that’s why we need to prevent obesity and keep our body fit.

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Is obesity a disease?

Long time ago, obesity is hardly exit.

>>A long time ago, obesity hardly existed.

Nowadays most people eat too much especially, they eat junk food a lot.

>>Nowadays, most people eat too much, especially junk food.

That makes people fatter and fatter.

>>That makes people twice fatter than normal.

Recently, many people suffer form obesity.

>>Recently, many people are now suffering from obesity.

Obesity cases other diseases such as diabetes, hypertension.

>>Obesity causes other forms of diseases such as diabetes and hypertension.

Definitely obesity is a disease and that’s why we need to prevent obesity and keep our body fit.

>>Definitely, obesity is a disease. That’s why we need to prevent it by keeping our bodies stay fit and healthy.