Is obesity a great problem in where you live?
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Obesity is a problem all over the world. Normally most Koreans don’t worry that much, there are few percent of people have a obesity as a problem. They control their weight all the time.
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Obesity is a problem all over the world.
>>> correct
Normally most Koreans don’t worry that much, there are few percent of people have a obesity as a problem.
>>> Normally, most Korean\'s don\'t worry that much, there are a few percentage of people that has problems with obesity.
They control their weight all the time.
>>> correct
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