Is obesity a great problem in where you live? Why are there so many obese people in the US?

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I think Koreans are really conscious about their health and looks.

And that makes them look great.

Especially in terms of fashion, you are great in choosing wonderful clothes.

Actor and actresses serve as a role model as you\'ve mentioned below.

Even the people in my country admires a lot of Koreans.

Oh! Food? Hihihihi. I\'m guilty. Hahaha! I eat a lot of food everyday.

I love eating ice cream and cake. Hihihihi!

I do agree with you, we should exercise to stay healthy and fit.

Thanks for a marvelous essay. Take Care!

Teacher Nina

Obesity is not a serious problem in Korea whereas it seems to be one of the major social issues in the US.

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However even in Korea, obesity is becoming problematic these days because more and more young people are getting subjected to obesity due to the changed diet, the westernized diet.

>> Did you mean: However even in Korea, obesity is becoming a problem these days because more and more young people are getting subjected to obesity due to the changed diet, the westernized diet.

>> OR: However even in Korea, obesity is becoming a problem these days because young people are getting subjected to obesity due to the western food is increasing.

Another problem is some young women’s over-reacting to the obesity. 

>> Another problem is that some young women are over-reacting about obesity.

Some surveys or statistics show that many women think themselves as being fat and overweight although they are actually not.

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They fall in the range of “normal”. 

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>> OR: They fall in the range of normal weight.

Korean women are extremely sensitive to their look and are mindful of their weight.

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>> OR: Korean women are extremely sensitive about their look and are mindful of their weight.

Looking at celebrities like actresses, they are a bit too slim, but they are role models of ordinary young women, so that they become the victims of anorexia in an extreme case.

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The primary reason of obesity is that people enjoy fast food that contain high calories too often and they do not exercise.

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It is simple that if you eat a lot and do not consume the calories, they will become fat.

>> It is simple that if you eat a lot and don\'t consume foods that are rich in calories, they will become fat.

>> OR: It is simple that if you eat a lot and don\'t consume foods that are rich in calories, they will gain weight.