Is online information useful? Simple information? Or is it wisdom?
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To my way of thinking, we mostly get information on the internet, but they\'re not necessarily useful or wisdom. Information mainly provides simple answers to \"who\", \"what\", \"where\", and \"when\" questions, and these may or may not be useful. However, wisdom is deeply evaluated understanding of the information. In other words, wisdom is the knowledge or experience that a society or culture has collected over a long time. Therefore, people selectively utilize online information and always secure credibility through double-checking from other resources like books or articles.
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To my way of thinking, we mostly get information on the internet, but they\'re not necessarily useful or wisdom. Information mainly provides simple answers to \"who\", \"what\", \"where\", and \"when\" questions, and these may or may not be useful.
>> correct
However, wisdom is deeply evaluated understanding of the information.
>> or: However, wisdom is profoundly evaluated understanding of the information.
In other words, wisdom is the knowledge or experience that a society or culture has collected over a long time.
>> or: In other words, wisdom is the knowledge or experience that a society or culture has gathered with the passage of time.
Therefore, people selectively utilize online information and always secure credibility through double-checking from other resources like books or articles.
>> correct
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