Is online schooling as effective as in-class education? Why or why not? :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think online schooling is as effective as in class education. Because we get online schooling, we can get a class without any interruption. And we can search some information for class subjects. If we get in class education, ther are so many students so we can\'t take a more knowledge.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Daisy.
Thank you for diligently answering this essay homework. I agree with your answer. I believe that online schooling can be as effective, if not better than in-class schooling. It has so many advantages too.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. ^^
See you later. :)
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for diligently answering this essay homework. I agree with your answer. I believe that online schooling can be as effective, if not better than in-class schooling. It has so many advantages too.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a great day. ^^
See you later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
Because we get online schooling, we can get a class without any interruption.
>> It\'s because in online schooling, we can take classes without any interruptions.
And we can search some information for class subjects.
>> We can also search some information for our class subjects.
If we get in class education, ther are so many students so we can\'t take a more knowledge.
>> In in-class education, there are so many students so it\'s difficult for us to acquire more knowledge.
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