Is photography art?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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It is a matter of course that photography is art.
>> It is a matter of course that photography is art.
>> OR: Yes, photography is art.
The quality of photo depends on who take it.
>> The quality of photo depends on who is taking it.
It does not have any reason that photography is not art.
>> It does not have any reasons why photography will not be considered as art.
If it is easy to take, people don\'t need to visit photo studio when they want to take a profile photo.
>> If it is easy to take photos, people don\'t need to visit photo studios when they want to take a profile photo.
The photographer is professional who is accredited by government.
>> The photographer is a professional who is accredited by the government.
>> OR: A professional photographer has been accredited by the government.
I believe that professional photographer is only the person who is able to take art photo.
>> I believe that a professional photographer is the only person who is able to take art photos.
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