Is playing video games good or bad? Why? Kindly answer in not more than five (5) sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think it\'s good. There\'s no advantage for me to spend my spare by playing then. And I only I can learn is how to curse effectively and how I should evade my trolling.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ye [이름]! (^__^)
While it may seem fun, gaming is actually mental exercise. According to certain research, playing particular video games can help with hand-eye coordination, problem-solving abilities, and information processing.
However, too much gaming can impair your ability to control your emotions. Anxiety, despair, and aggressive behavior are all symptoms of poor emotional regulation.
Have a good day!
__T. Mayleen :)
I don\'t think it\'s good.
>>> CORRECT
There\'s no advantage for me to spend my spare by playing then.
>>> There\'s no advantage for me to spend my spare time playing games.
And I only I can learn is how to curse effectively and how I should evade my trolling.
>>> Also, all I can learn is how to curse effectively and how to evade my trolling.
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