Is religion important to you? (ANSWER)

2018-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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I don't think religion is very important. And I don't think religion is too unnecessary. I think religion is important and sometimes it's not important. When we have to go to special place in religion, we have to think it inportant. But when we make friends, we have nothing to do with religion. At this time, religion is not important. So, I think religion is sometimes are important, and sometimes are not important. Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

HOMEWORK:

Is religion important to you? Answer in complete sentences.

ANSWER:

I don\'t think religion is very important.
And I don\'t think religion is too unnecessary.
I think religion is important and sometimes it\'s not important.
When we have to go to special place in religion, we have to think it inportant. But when we make friends, we have nothing to do with religion. At this time, religion is not important.
So, I think religion is sometimes are important, and sometimes are not important.

CORRECTIONS:

I don\'t think religion is very important.
And I don\'t think religion is too unnecessary.
I think religion is important and sometimes it\'s not important.
When we have to go to special place in religion, we have to think it\'s important. But when we make friends, it\'s nothing to do with religion. At this time, religion is not important.
So, I think religion is sometimes important, and sometimes not.

** Hi [이름], well done. You just have a few corrections in your answer. Your thought about the question is although a bit bare, it somehow contains an idea or opinion which is related to the question.
Talk with you tomorrow. ^^

---------T. Alexia----------

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