Is religion to blame for the increase in world terrorism? If so, why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think religion is one of the reasons for terrorism.
Especially, IS, Islamic State hates Christians.
They believe that they can be blessed by killing a lot of people.
Then they always make problems and kill a lot of people.
Their belief is very strict than other religions, and it is very hard to prevent terrorisms.
Luckily, Donald Trump is planning to remove Is, and actually the boss of Is was killed by the U.S.A.
I hope to live in a peaceful environment, not in fear of terrorism.
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Hi Chloe!
Here are the corrections.
I think religion is one of the reasons for terrorism. Especially, IS, Islamic State hates Christians.
>>Correct!
They believe that they can be blessed by killing a lot of people. Then they always make problems and kill a lot of people.
>>They believe that they can be blessed by killing a lot of people. Then, they always make problems and kill a lot of people.
Their belief is very strict than other religions, and it is very hard to prevent terrorisms. Luckily, Donald Trump is planning to remove Is, and actually the boss of Is was killed by the U.S.A. I hope to live in a peaceful environment, not in fear of terrorism.
>>Their belief is very strict than other religions, and it is very hard to prevent terrorism. Luckily, Donald Trump is planning to remove IS, and actually, the boss of IS was killed by the U.S.A. I hope to live in a peaceful environment, not in fear of terrorism.
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