Is riding an airplane something you enjoy ?
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Yes, I really enjoy riding an airplan.
Speaking more exactly, I enjoy not only riding an airplane but also traveling abroad.
Koreans have to ride an airplane to travel abroad.
We can\'t even travel to China or Russia by train because South Korea is separate and has hostile relations with North Korea.
South Korea is like an island country like the Philippines.
Filipinos must also use airplanes to travel abroad.
And the second thing that I enjoy riding an airplane is that I can meet are beautiful stewardess who are wearing nice and stylish uniforms and passengers excited about traveling abroad in an airplane.
And the third thing is that I can see the view outside landscapes through the windows of the airplane.
The view is really amasing.
I can see clouds below the plane, and the sea, mountains, and villages in the distance.
They look really small.
I was relieved to hear that you weren\'t sick.
I will try to complete my homework within your working hours.
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Hi [이름] Ho^^
Thank you for completing the homework early.
I love the view in high places too actually. It\'s really beautiful.
_T. SHAY^^
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Yes, I really enjoy riding an airplan.
>>Yes, I really enjoy riding an airplane.
Thank you for completing the homework early.
I love the view in high places too actually. It\'s really beautiful.
_T. SHAY^^
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Yes, I really enjoy riding an airplan.
>>Yes, I really enjoy riding an airplane.
OR: Yes, I do love riding an airplane.
Speaking more exactly, I enjoy not only riding an airplane but also traveling abroad.
Speaking more exactly, I enjoy not only riding an airplane but also traveling abroad.
>>To be specific, I enjoy not only riding an airplane, but also traveling abroad.
Koreans have to ride an airplane to travel abroad.
Koreans have to ride an airplane to travel abroad.
>>Correct
OR: We have to ride an airplane to travel abroad.
We can\'t even travel to China or Russia by train because South Korea is separate and has hostile relations with North Korea.
OR: We have to ride an airplane to travel abroad.
We can\'t even travel to China or Russia by train because South Korea is separate and has hostile relations with North Korea.
>>Correct
OR: Even though it\'s possible to travel on land going to China and Russia, we can\'t because of the relationship between North and South Korea.
South Korea is like an island country like the Philippines.
>>South Korea is a country with many islands like the Philippines.
OR: Even though it\'s possible to travel on land going to China and Russia, we can\'t because of the relationship between North and South Korea.
South Korea is like an island country like the Philippines.
>>South Korea is a country with many islands like the Philippines.
OR: South Korea is composed of many islands like the Philippines.
Filipinos must also use airplanes to travel abroad.
>>Correct
Filipinos must also use airplanes to travel abroad.
>>Correct
OR: It seems like Filipinos also take airplanes to travel abroad.
And the second thing that I enjoy riding an airplane is that I can meet are beautiful stewardess who are wearing nice and stylish uniforms and passengers excited about traveling abroad in an airplane
And the second thing that I enjoy riding an airplane is that I can meet are beautiful stewardess who are wearing nice and stylish uniforms and passengers excited about traveling abroad in an airplane
>>And the second thing that I enjoy in riding an airplane is that I can meet beautiful stewardess who are wearing nice and stylish uniforms and passengers who are excited about traveling abroad.
And the third thing is that I can see the view outside landscapes through the windows of the airplane.
And the third thing is that I can see the view outside landscapes through the windows of the airplane.
>>And the third thing is that I can see the aerial view of the beautiful landscapes through the windows of the airplane.
The view is really amasing.
>>The view is really amazing.
The view is really amasing.
>>The view is really amazing.
OR: It\'s a spectacular view.
I can see clouds below the plane, and the sea, mountains, and villages in the distance.
I can see clouds below the plane, and the sea, mountains, and villages in the distance.
>>I can see the clouds, sea, mountains, and villages from a distance.
They look really small.
I will try to complete my homework within your working hours.
They look really small.
>>Correct
OR: All those huge things look small up in the sky.
I was relieved to hear that you weren\'t sick.I will try to complete my homework within your working hours.
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