Is school reunion common in your country?
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Is school reunion common in your country?
That question is very interesting to me because I used to participate in my high school and university reunion in Korea.
>>This question is very interesting to me, because I used to participate in my high school and university reunions in Korea.
or>>This is a very interesting question for me, because I used to attend the high school and university reunions in Korea.
The reason why I register those group is that Korea is very small country.
>>The reason why I registered in these groups is that Korea is a very small country.
You may guess how small it is. My country is 100 times smaller than where I live now.
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or>>My country is 100 times smaller than my current country of residence, as you may have guessed.
So people who live in Korea must need their connection to live in a small country.
>>So, people who live in Korea, need connections, in order for them to be able to live in a small country.
Also, we can say that there are three elements that our lives make easier which are school, relatives, and area connection.
>>Also, we can say that there are three elements in our lives which help make it easier for us to exist, they are the school, our relatives, and the area of residence.
A few people could be success without them.
>>A few people could become successful without them.
But if most of Korean didn\'t have those things, they would be fail easily in Korea.
>>But, if most of the Koreans don\'t have those things, they can easily fail in their own country.
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