Is school reunion common in your country?

2020-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

That question is very interesting to me because I used to participate in my high school and university reunion in Korea. The reason why I register those group is that Korea is very small country. You may guess how small it is. My country is 100 times smaller than where I live now. So people who live in Korea must need their connection to live in a small country. Also, we can say that there are three elements that our lives make easier which are school, relatives, and area connection. A few people could be success without them. But if most of Korean didn\'t have those things, they would be fail easily in Korea.

강사 첨삭

Hello Jia,

Thank you for today’s homework!

Have a good day and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

Is school reunion common in your country?

That question is very interesting to me because I used to participate in my high school and university reunion in Korea.

>>This question is very interesting to me, because I used to participate in my high school and university reunions in Korea.

or>>This is a very interesting question for me, because I used to attend the high school and university reunions in Korea.

The reason why I register those group is that Korea is very small country.

>>The reason why I registered in these groups is that Korea is a very small country.

You may guess how small it is. My country is 100 times smaller than where I live now.

CORRECT!

or>>My country is 100 times smaller than my current country of residence, as you may have guessed.

So people who live in Korea must need their connection to live in a small country.

>>So, people who live in Korea, need connections, in order for them to be able to live in a small country.

Also, we can say that there are three elements that our lives make easier which are school, relatives, and area connection.

>>Also, we can say that there are three elements in our lives which help make it easier for us to exist, they are the school, our relatives, and the area of residence.

A few people could be success without them.

>>A few people could become successful without them.

But if most of Korean didn\'t have those things, they would be fail easily in Korea.

>>But, if most of the Koreans don\'t have those things, they can easily fail in their own country.

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