Is smoking a problem in your country?
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강사 첨삭
This is very true, Sir [이름]!
People should only smoke in designated areas and not just everywhere. I can\'t also withstand living in an apartment that\'s tantamount to a chimney of cigarette. Therefore, even with some advertisements linking smoking as cancerous yet people are still incognizant about it. Great composition! Keep them coming.
~Teacher Eunice
People in Korea prefer to live in the apartment.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: Korean people prefer to live in apartments.
The one of the main problem living in the apartment is smoking.
>>> One of the main problems living in the apartment is smoking.
A lot of people used to smoke inside the building 10 years ago, but we can not smoke inside and outside building nowadays.
>>> A lot of people used to smoke inside the building ten years ago, but we can not smoke inside and outside the building nowadays.
>>> OR: Ten years ago, people used to smoke inside the building, but nowadays we are not allowed to smoke inside and outside the building anymore.
It is not easy to find somebody who is smoking in their rooms or toilet.
>>> Correct!
It caused a lot of complaints from neighbors.
>>> It caused a lot of complaints from the neighbors.
I had a problem with smoking caused by my neighbor when I was living in UAE.
>>> I had a problem with smoking caused by my neighbors when I was living in the UAE.
I would like to hit him because of it.
>>> Correct!
I know that smoking is somebody\'s right but they have to keep their manner.
>>> Correct!
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