Is social skills also an important ability at work? Why so?
학생이 쓴 원문
I firmly believe social skill is the utmost quality at work. The necessary is due to collaboration. In most cases, working toward one goal as a team facilitate creativity and increase efficiency. Having an intimate relationship with co-workers is inevitable in growing bonds for cooperation. The formation of relationships could be fulfilled by express ideas freely. This relationship could not achieve it without any social skills. Accordingly, social skills, for instance, being a good listener and open-minded, will be crucial in the workplace.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel. We are indeed social beings. Humans need to socialize because no man is indeed an island.
- T. Beth
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I firmly believe social skill is the utmost quality at work. >>> OR: I firmly believe social skill is the utmost quality needed at work.
The necessary is due to collaboration.
>>> correct
In most cases, working toward one goal as a team facilitate creativity and increase efficiency.
>>> OR: In most cases, working towards one goal as a team facilitates creativity and increase efficiency.
Having an intimate relationship with co-workers is inevitable in growing bonds for cooperation.
>>> correct
The formation of relationships could be fulfilled by express ideas freely.
>>> The formation of relationships could be fulfilled by expressing ideas freely.
This relationship could not achieve it without any social skills.
>>> This relationship could not be achieved without any social skills.
Accordingly, social skills, for instance, being a good listener and open-minded, will be crucial in the workplace.
>>> correct
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