Is suicide a serious problem in South Korea? What factors increase the risk of sucide?

Good morning [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your opinion about suicide. I hope your government can find ways to decrease the rate of suicide in your country.^^

Have a good day!

~Kelly^^

I think suicide is not a serious problem in South Korea in these day for some reasons. 

>> I think, suicide is not a serious problem in South Korea in these days for some reasons.  
Firstly, we are living easier than past.

>> Firstly, we are living an easier life compared to the past.

Most people are well off and don\'t starve because we produce a lot of food and we can help poor people.

>> Correct.
Secondly, we are enjoying our leisure time, so we can get rid of our stress.

>> Correct.

In my case, whenever I\'m under stress by work or study, I usually exercise like running and badminton with my friends or family.

>> In my case, whenever I\'m under stress by work or study, I usually exercise by running and play badminton with my friends or family.

After that, I can be in a lighthearted mood.

>> Correct.
However, if I want to talk about factors of suicide, I want to talk about applying university and getting job.

>> However, I think that the factors that increase the risk of suicide are applying to university and getting a job.

We have exam to apply to university in my country.

>> We have university entrance exam in my country.

So, most Korean high school students study for that.

>> Correct.

Unfortunately, they sometimes choose to kill themselves after they are failed the university.

>> Unfortunately, they sometimes choose to kill themselves after they failed the university exam.

In addition, we have difficulty in finding job nowadays, which is also one of the causes in suicide. 

>> In addition, we have difficulty in finding a job nowadays, which is also one of the causes of suicide. 
In sum, even though I think suicide is not serious problem in my country, we try to resolve the problem.

>> In summary, even though I think suicide is not a serious problem in my country, we try to resolve the problem.