Is technology a good or a bad thing?
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The technology is good.
Because the technology city is very easy. I can\'t live without electricity,because if we can not electricity,very dark and very bolling.
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The technology is good.
>> CORRECT!
Because the technology city is very easy.
>> Technology makes living in a city very easy.
I can\'t live without electricity,because if we can not electricity,very dark and very billing.
>> I can\'t live without electricity, because there\'s no electricity it will be very dark.
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