Is technology advancing more rapidly than it did in the past? Do you feel concerned about keeping up
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Specific technologies is advancing high rapidly, such as smart phone, AI.
AI could replace human someday and someone would be lost thier job.
However, a new job will create in the future.
Our ancestor also had experienced same situation during Industrial Revolution. but we still live.
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Specific technologies is advancing high rapidly, such as smart phone, AI.
>> Specific technologies are advancing rapidly, such as smartphones and AI.
AI could replace human someday and someone would be lost thier job.
>> AI could replace humans someday, and some people may lose their jobs.
However, a new job will create in the future.
>> However, new jobs will be created in the future.
Our ancestor also had experienced same situation during Industrial Revolution. but we still live.
>> Our ancestors also experienced a similar situation during the Industrial Revolution, but we still thrive.
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