Is the belief in UFOs, aliens, physic powers, etc, growing because the belief in religion is dying?
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Rather than the question of religious belief, It is thought that such things are more interesting than religious beliefs.
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Rather than the question of religious belief, It is thought that such things are more interesting than religious beliefs.
>> It is thought that such things are more interesting than religious beliefs.
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