Is the desert safe or dagerous to visit?
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I think is dangerous.
I think it\'s dangerous because it has scolpions, cactus, and a sand storm.
But it has cool oasis
Do you want to visit to the desert?
do you think safe of dangerous?
These are the reasons why I think the desert is dangerous.
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I think is dangerous.
>> I think it is dangerous.
I think it\'s dangerous because it has scolpions, cactus, and a sand storm.
>> I think it\'s dangerous because it has scorpions, cacti, and sand storms.
But it has a cool oasis.
>> CORRECT!
Do you want to visit to the desert?
>> Do you want to visit the desert?
do you think safe of dangerous?
>> Do you think it\'s safe or dangerous?
These are the reasons why I think the desert is dangerous.
>> CORRECT!
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