Is the effort involved in pursuing any goal valuable, even if the goal is not reached?
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I definitely think the effort is very valuable even if the goal is not reached.
There is a word "the process is more important than the result"
Yes, these days especially in the business, we have to make a good result even if the processes are not smooth. However, I don't think so. We can't see all the effort that someone did for the result, but we have to try to know that person's effort.
For the adult, it is really hard to look that efforts, but for children, we have to know their effort even if the results are not good. Think about the time when we were really young like as the baby. At that time, all the adult alway cheer up us to do everything.
How much we fail to stand up ourselves, the adult keeps cheer we up. That makes us can walk and do everything that people have to do.
So I think the effort is more important than the result.
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Hi, [이름]! (^^,)
How\'s your day going so far?
Not too busy, I hope.
Thank you for consistently writing in our composition board.
It speaks a lot about you. ^^
Success depends on two related factors and those are: ATTITUDE and EFFORT.
A person\'s attitude about his ability to succeed determines the kind of effort he should put forth to accomplish a task.
If a person attributes poor performance to the wrong factors, he may be in a lifelong struggle with failure.
When I was young, my mom used to tell me that giving your best in everything that you do would define who you will become in the future.
She constantly reminded me that I have to make an effort and give my best regardless of the outcome.
I was pushed and raised to give nothing but my best in everything that I do.
Now that I\'m older, I think she was right.
I\'ve gained confidence and I\'ve learned to value everything I have now because I know deep down that I\'ve worked hard for all of them.
Thank you for this composition [이름]. I am reminded once again to give nothing but my best.
Have a great day [이름]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry (^^,)
I definitely think the effort is very valuable even if the goal is not reached.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I definitely think effort is still important even if the goal is not reached.
There is a word \"the process is more important than the result\"
>> There is a saying that goes this way: \"the process is more important than the result.\"Yes, these days especially in the business, we have to make a good result even if the processes are not smooth.
>> Yes, these days especially in the business, we have to come up with a good result even if the processes are not smooth.
However, I don\'t think so.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, I would say otherwise and oppose this perception.
We can\'t see all the effort that someone did for the result, but we have to try to know that person\'s effort.
>> [DO YOU MEAN]: We can\'t weigh the amount of effort that someone has given based from the result alone. We have to try to know that person\'s effort.For the adult, it is really hard to look that efforts, but for children, we have to know their effort even if the results are not good.
>> For an adult, it is really hard to acknowledge all the efforts given, but for children, we have to acknowledge their efforts regardless of the result.
Think about the time when we were really young like as the baby.
>> Think about the time when you were really young like a baby.
At that time, all the adult alway cheer up us to do everything.
>> At that time, all the adults around you would always cheer you up and encourage you to do everything.How much we fail to stand up ourselves, the adult keeps cheer we up.
>> No matter how many times you fall while attempting to walk, they would keep on cheering you up.
That makes us can walk and do everything that people have to do.
>> That\'s how a person learns how to walk. So I think the effort is more important than the result.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> That is why, I think effort is more important than the result.
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