Is the main value of the arts to teach us about the world around us?
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I think the arts teach us about the world around us.
The art is inspired from the world around us. It is contained all of the humans feeling, culture and being. This is the main value of the arts and we can learn a lot of things from the arts.
For example, when I can't hit on a new idea I usually visit the art exhibition. I'm not well known about the art, but it always makes me think a different way and this give great inspirations.
We watch the same view, the artist think a different way and express it a unique way. Sometimes they find unique things that I can't find it.
So I think the arts teach us about the world around us.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! Happy Friday! ^^
I really love reading your compositions.
It\'s because they reveal a lot about you and the kind of personality you have. ^^
It is impossible to look anywhere in this world and not see an artist\'s creation or some aspect of art.
Art allows everybody to express themselves in anyway necessary.
It provides an outlet for all kinds of emotions.
Without art, the world would be dull.
That\'s the reason why art is very important in our day-to-day lives.
I hope you are having a wonderful day [이름]!
Enjoy your weekend! I\'ll see you again on Monday. ^^
~Teacher Charry (^_^)
I think the arts teach us about the world around us.
>> I think arts teach us about the world around us.
The art is inspired from the world around us.
>> Art derives its inspiration from the world around us.
It is contained all of the humans feeling, culture and being.
>> Its context contain human feelings, culture and being.
This is the main value of the arts and we can learn a lot of things from the arts.
>> This is the main value of arts and we can learn a lot of things from it.
For example, when I can\'t hit on a new idea I usually visit the art exhibition.
>> For example, when I can\'t come up with a new idea, I usually visit the art exhibit.
I\'m not well known about the art, but it always makes me think a different way and this give great inspirations. >> I don\'t know much about art, but it always makes me think in a different way and gives me great inspiration.
We watch the same view, the artist think a different way and express it a unique way.
>> We see the same thing, but the artist\'s way of thinking is different and expresses it in a unique way.
Sometimes they find unique things that I can\'t find it.
>> Sometimes they find unique things that I can\'t find.So I think the arts teach us about the world around us.
>> So I think arts teach us about the world around us.
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