Is 'the student life' the best time in people's lives?

2014-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Leah

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It is said that student life is the best life ever. In general, when people want to get back their best memories, almost all of them are student memories: a time when you don't have worries, when you meet a lot of new people and find friends for the rest of your life, or have crazy and funny parties. One of the most famous myths about student life is the parties. A lot of people think that students are always very ‘busy’ with parties and they don’t have time to do other things, as for instance, study. But study is very important complement for student. Why? Because student have to go college for their future. For me, study is very cruel things. Sometimes I really want to give up my studyings and play with my friends. Without study, I think 'the student life' is the best time in people's lives.

강사 첨삭


Hello there!

Thank you for expressing your ideas and opinions.

You did great. Indeed, student life will be better if we don\'t have to study.  Though we have to understand that studying is part of a student\'s life. Well then, I believe that you should find balance. You should study, at the same time enjoy your life.

Anyway, please check the corrections and suggestions I\'ve made.

See you! Enjoy your day!

~T. May~

It is said that student life is the best life ever. 

>> Correct!
In general, when people want to get back their best memories, almost all of them are student memories: a time when you don\'t have worries, when you meet a lot of new people and find friends for the rest of your life, or have crazy and funny parties. 

>> In general, when people think about their best memories, almost all of them are student memories: a time when you don\'t have worries, when you meet a lot of new people,  find friends for the rest of your life, or have crazy and fun parties. 
One of the most famous myths about student life is the parties. 

>>  Correct!
A lot of people think that students are always very ‘busy’ with parties and they 
 don’t have time to do other things, as for instance, study.

>> Correct!
 But study is very important complement for student.

>> But studying complements a student.

Why?

>> Correct!
 Because student have to go college for their future.

>>  Because students have to go to college for their future.

 For me, study is very cruel things.

>> For me, studying is very cruel.^^

Sometimes I really want to give up my studyings and play with my friends. 

>> Sometimes, I really want to give up studying and just play with my friends. 
 Without study, I think \'the student life\' is the best time in people\'s lives.

>>  Without studying, I think \'the student life\' is the best time in people\'s lives.^^

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