Is the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Not necessarily. Change is needed but sometime need traditional ways .
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Not necessarily.
>> CORRECT
OR >> That’s not always the case.
Change is needed but sometime need traditional ways .
>> Change is needed, but sometimes traditional ways are still important.
>> CORRECT
OR >> That’s not always the case.
Change is needed but sometime need traditional ways .
>> Change is needed, but sometimes traditional ways are still important.
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