Is the weather in a country important when you choose a place to go? Why?
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I tried to choose a country have warm weather, when I choose the vacation places. because, I went to there to enjoy a rest.
If it\'s raining whole day, I would be depressed.
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I tried to choose a country have warm weather, when I choose the vacation places. because, I went to there to enjoy a rest.
>> I try to choose countries with warm weather when selecting vacation destinations because I go there to relax.
If it\'s raining whole day, I would be depressed.
If it\'s raining whole day, I would be depressed.
>> If it rains all day, I would feel depressed.
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