Is there a kind of beverage that you will never try?
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I’m a fresh juice person, so during summer season I tend to have water melon juice, mango juice, and peach juice because it helps me quench my thirst.
But I never try some banana beverage. The reason why is that I’m allergic to banana. So If I have a banana, I could get an upset stomach.
Also I don’t try just coconut beverage. Yeah I tried it before, but It was not my style. Even though I like coconut powder and coconut cookies, The only coconut beverage is not my style. Hum.. I can drink it if the coconuts are mixed with other fruits.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI’m a fresh juice person, so during summer season I tend to have water melon juice, mango juice, and peach juice because it helps me quench my thirst.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I’m a person who loves fresh juice, so during summer season I tend to have water melon juice, mango juice, and peach juice because it helps me quench my thirst.
But I never try some banana beverage.
>> CORRECT!
The reason why is that I’m allergic to banana.
>> CORRECT!
So If I have a banana, I could get an upset stomach.
>> CORRECT!
Also I don’t try just coconut beverage.
>> Also, I don’t want to try just the coconut drink.
Yeah I tried it before, but It was not my style.
>> CORRECT!
Even though I like coconut powder and coconut cookies, The only coconut beverage is not my style.
>> CORRECT!
Hum.. I can drink it if the coconuts are mixed with other fruits.
>> CORRECT!
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