Is there a kind of food that you will never eat?
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When I was a child, I had loved Jellies. Jelly is sweet, sour and it has good texture. I heard that jelly is made from Protein. So, I had thought that Jelly is good for health. But, It is totally not. When I eat jelly, it makes lots of problems. It can be a cause getting cavities, even if I brush teeth very hard. And, It can cause abdominal obesity.
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When I was a child, I had loved Jellies.
>> CORRECT!Jelly is sweet, sour and it has good texture.
>> Jellies are sweet, sour, and it has a good texture. I heard that jelly is made from Protein.
>> CORRECT!So, I had thought that Jelly is good for health.
>> CORRECT!But, It is totally not.
>> But, it is totally not. When I eat jelly, it makes lots of problems.
>> CORRECT!It can be a cause getting cavities, even if I brush teeth very hard.
>> It can cause cavities, even if I brush my teeth very hard.And, It can cause abdominal obesity.
>> And, It can cause obesity.
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