Is there a kind of movie that you will never watch?
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I never watch horror and ghost movies. When I was in middle school, my class friends and me watched a ghost movie which is very famous mystery horror story. I couldn’t watch most scenes. I hate not only the atmosphere before a ghost appears but also the sound. So if I have a chance to watch that movies, I’d like to avoid it. Avoiding it is not possible, I just cover my eyes with my hands.
Because If I see the horror scenes by mistake, my actions are too limited.
I can’t sleep well! I can’t go bathroom alone because that scenes come to mind at night. And I can’t walk alone at very dark night. That’s why I never watch these movies as much as I can.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleI never watch horror and ghost movies.
>> CORRECT!
When I was in middle school, my class friends and me watched a ghost movie which is very famous mystery horror story.
>> When I was in middle school, my class friends and I watched a ghost movie which is a very famous mystery and horror story.
I couldn’t watch most scenes.
>> CORRECT!
I hate not only the atmosphere before a ghost appears but also the sound.
>> CORRECT!
So if I have a chance to watch that movies, I’d like to avoid it.
>> So if I have a chance to watch those movies, I’d like to avoid it.
Avoiding it is not possible, I just cover my eyes with my hands.
>> CORRECT!
Because If I see the horror scenes by mistake, my actions are too limited.
>> That\'s because if I see the horror scenes by mistake, my actions are too limited.
I can’t sleep well!
>> CORRECT!
OR >> It\'s hard for me to sleep soundly.
I can’t go bathroom alone because that scenes come to mind at night.
I can’t go bathroom alone because that scenes come to mind at night.
>> I can’t go to the bathroom alone because that scenes come to mind at night.
And I can’t walk alone at very dark night.
>> And, I can’t walk alone at a very dark night.
That’s why I never watch these movies as much as I can.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> As much as possible, I avoid watching these movies.
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