Is there a kind of sport that you will never play?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to watch sport game on TV but I really don\'t like to play sport game.
I really don\'t want to harm other person because my ability is really bad.
When i child, I often attended soccer game. Ability and skills were still bad but I really ran hard during game.
Be hit by ball is necessary during soccer game, But When i be hit by ball my face, That was really hurts.
After that, I afraid of ball and number of game was decreased.
Now, I never have been play soccer since twelve. Playing Soccer or basketball are really still afraid to me.
On the other hand, I really hope to learn tennis, It\'s really safe than other sport and there is no body fight during the game.
But there is a cation. Elbow injure is frequency while when you play a tennis.
So we have to stretch before exercising and always take a elbow guard.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Joon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
I like to watch sport game on TV but I really don\'t like to play sport game.
>> I like to watch sports games on TV but I really don\'t like playing sports.
I really don\'t want to harm other person because my ability is really bad.
>> I really don\'t want to harm another person because my ability is really bad.
OR >> >> I really don\'t want to harm other people because my ability is really bad.
When i child, I often attended soccer game.
>> When I was a child, I often attended soccer games.
Ability and skills were still bad but I really ran hard during game.
>> My abilities and skills were still bad but I really ran hard during the game.
Be hit by ball is necessary during soccer game, But When i be hit by ball my face, That was really hurts.
>> Hitting the ball is necessary during soccer games, but when my face gets hit by a ball, that really hurts.
After that, I afraid of ball and number of game was decreased.
>> After that, I was afraid of getting hit by a ball and the number of games was decreased.
Now, I never have been play soccer since twelve.
>> I stopped playing soccer since twelve.
Playing Soccer or basketball are really still afraid to me.
>> I am still really afraid of playing soccer or basketball.
On the other hand, I really hope to learn tennis, It\'s really safe than other sport and there is no body fight during the game.
>> On the other hand, I really hope to learn tennis, it\'s much safer than other sports and there are no body fights or heated arguments during the game.
But there is a cation.
>> But there should be a caution.
Elbow injure is frequency while when you play a tennis.
>> Elbow injuries frequently happen when you play tennis.
So we have to stretch before exercising and always take a elbow guard.
>> So we have to stretch before exercising, and always use an elbow guard.
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