Is there a national dance in your country?
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Every country have an own folk song and dance.
>>> Every country has its own folk song and dance.
Our country have a national dance too.
>>> Our country has a national dance too.
Korea have national dance movement is a slow motion.
>>> Korea has a slow-motion dance.
It is name a fan dance, also seung- moo.
>>> It is called a Fan Dance in Korea we call it Seung-Moo.
Most people are loving fan dance.
>>> Most people love the fan dance.
It is a beautiful that play solo or group.
>> The dance is beautiful whether it is a solo dance or a group dance.
Dancer wear [이름]- bok.
>>> Dancers wear [이름]-bok.
If you have a c[이름]ce watch the YouTube c[이름]nel is a Korea fan dance.
>>> If you have a c[이름]ce, look for the fan dance on YouTube.
You will like it.
>>> Correct!
I love every county music and culture.
>>> Correct!
Esepecialy I like western dance.
>>> I most especially like the western dance.
My favorite is a Waltz .
>>> My favorite is Waltz.
My husband and I took lesson before my older son got married.
>>> My husband and I took a lesson before my older son got married.
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