Is there a particular song that always puts you in a good mood? If yes, what is it, and explain why
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Homework: Is there a particular song that always puts you in a good mood? If yes, what is it, and explain why?
There are so many that I\'ve selected top five songs.
>> There are so many that I\'ve selected the top five songs.
First, it is a song called \"A Good Day\" of singer IU.
>> First, it is a song called \"A Good Day\" by singer IU.
IU is my favorite solo artist, and I love this song because I became her big fan with this song.
>> Correct
>> OR: IU is my favorite solo artist, and I love this song because I became her big fan through this song.
Also, I often listen to IU\'s three-tried high note, which is the highlight of the song, because it\'s attractive.
>> Correct
Second, it is a song called \"Fighting\" by SEVENTEEN\'s unit group, SEVENTEEN BSS.
>> Correct
As you can see from the title of the song, it\'s a song that cheers you up, so I listen to it when I need to cheer up.
>> Correct
Third, Maroon 5\'s \"Sugar\".
>> Correct
This music video is about Maroon 5 member going to the wedding hall and singing a wedding song.
>> This music video is about a Maroon 5 member going to the wedding hall and singing a wedding song.
It\'s a song with a fast tempo, so it\'s good to sing when I\'m in a good mood.
>> Correct
Fourth, the OST of the movie \"The greatest show man\", \"This is me\"
>> Correct
I like the lyrics very much, and I like it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can rasie my self-esteem high.
>> I like the lyrics very much, and I appreciate it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can raise my self-esteem high.
>> OR: I like the lyrics very much, and I appreciate it because it is a song that gives courage to the underprivileged and can boost my self-esteem.
Lastly, it is a classic.
>> Correct
Schumann\'s Troy Merai that it is good to listen to when you focus on something.
>> Schumann\'s \"Träumerei\" that is good to listen to when you need to focus on something.
For additional recommendations, I recommend Billie Eilish\'s \"Bad Guy\", Sam Smith\'s \"I\'m Not The Only One\", Charlie Puth\'s \"I Don\'t Think That I Like Her\" and Luis Fonsi\'s \"Despacito\"
>> Correct
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>> I\'ve attached the file because there are too many characters.
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